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What now?

Its a good attempt, but next time, spell check everything please.
I wouldn't call it blown out of proportion if he just imagined killing the teacher, if it was blown out of proportion then your friend has an incredibly boring life... with that said, its so much more than i have ever done in flash... so good job so far.

... right...

That was pointless crap.
there was no mention of sonic joining nintendo... just a little... thing at the end.
aslo there was no plot. going for a crap has more plot thatn this.

the drawing was good. good song.
you just need to work on a story line

nice one

I like the karting bit... the biggest piss take in the world...Nice drawing, hitler was very expressive.

what the crap?!

i have seen the page where i think you took this from, unless you worked on it with that page i think you took it from there as your own. In the case i am making false accusations, i am sorry, and you shooter was great.

good try

you need to make the tracks bigger.
it was good otherwise

a definite improvement

Good i like it more than the other one, now you need to give it the duck mechanism, to duck out of tha way of incoming bullets.